i think u have some progress! images are great, and i like ur decision of making images the star of the show. maybe a little more variety on the type. on some of your spreads it seems that type are on one spot on the ride hand side.. maybe play with size too. and for the "i like candy" and "line with a twist" spreads, the proportions are kinda 50-50. make it more extreme. =)
the line with the twist spread stand out a lot just because its so different. whereas the second one.. the pic is out of focus. try to exaggerate the blur or contrast so that it looks like its on purpose!
hi xiao,
ReplyDeletei think u have some progress!
images are great,
and i like ur decision of making images
the star of the show.
maybe a little more variety on the type.
on some of your spreads it seems that
type are on one spot on the ride hand side..
maybe play with size too.
and for the "i like candy" and "line with a
twist" spreads,
the proportions are kinda 50-50.
make it more extreme.
=)
-tracy
great!!!
ReplyDeletethey look so good.
the line with the twist spread stand out a lot just because its so different. whereas the second one.. the pic is out of focus. try to exaggerate the blur or contrast so that it looks like its on purpose!
i like :)
thank you tracy. i will work on it more....
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thank you el...
ReplyDeletesee you tomorrow